Need a second opinion on this.

[MrMad2000]

I made a MCSG Montage with ALL my scrap footage, I want to know if you guys think it's good or not. And for all you guys out there, I originally did make a montage of MCSG but it was really really bad and I deleted it instantly, and no, I didn't copy Theorectically, I knew about the song used in the video long before theo even released the video.

Please guys, tell me whats good and bad about it, I need some critisizium. <--- (How ever you spell it.)
And you guys are the best people I could turn to, so be truthful if you hate or love it, thanks.

 

[JokersMaze]

I didn't really like the part where there were multiple screens over a black background. Also, around 0:50, don't rotate your screen 90 degrees, it gets annoying to watch.

 

[Qualia]

Correct the punctuation and grammar, it's appalling

 

[MrMad2000]

Correct the punctuation and grammar, it's appalling

I typed it up really quickly due to I have to rush it because i'm really busy :/

 

[Qualia]

I typed it up really quickly due to I have to rush it because i'm really busy :/

If you didn't realise, I meant in the video.
If indeed you did understand what I was nudging at, why upload a video that indicates English is your second language?o.o

 

[MrMad2000]

If you didn't realise, I meant in the video.
If indeed you did understand what I was nudging at, why upload a video that indicates English is your second language?o.o

Believe it or not, English is actually my first language Isaac, because I am born in Kent, which is near London, and London is in England.

I apologize though that I didn't double check my spelling in the video though, but to be honest, i'm only actually starting out on Youtube.

 

[Qualia]

Believe it or not, English is actually my first language Isaac, because I am born in Kent, which is near London, and London is in England.

I know my British geography, note how I previously said

why upload a video that indicates English is your second language o.o

Indicates
D:

 

[InsanePickaxe]

really good I guess the 90 degree angle wasn't amazing but I enjoyed it..